For this\nprototype I made the script for the prologue of the visual novel. I hoped to\nlearn about the quality of writing and whether or not a reader could grasp what\nis happening from the text without being given a synopsis. The way I collected\ninformation about this was by asking if they could follow what was happening as\nwell as asking if the dialog made sense\/flowed properly.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Most of\nthe feedback I received was regarding the dream sequence the visual novel\nstarts off with. In this the main character is led to believe that what happens\nat the very start is a very vivid dream. Multiple people told me that I should\nuse more description and make the dream sequence longer. Currently it is only\nabout one paragraph. I agree with this because it\u2019s supposed to be a vivid\ndream, thus it should have a lot of description so that the reader can also feel\nlike it\u2019s a vivid dream as well.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Other\nfeedback I received included was to make the choices be more obvious as to how\nthey will impact the story. Currently the only choice so far makes you hear\nsome dialog from either of the two characters but it is not clear. Lastly the\nthird type of feedback I received was regarding the actual script rather than\nthe story. One way to make it more clear for a reader who has no idea about the\nstory is to do some storyboarding so they can tell what they are supposed to\nsee on the screen in the actual visual novel. Someone suggested a two column\nformat where it would look like pic | text is a good way of doing this. This\nmakes a lot of sense as it is clear to me, but not necessarily to other people\nat the moment.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
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